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Dawn Has Come...

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Dawn Has Come

What's so hard to explain?
Why did you feel the need to play these games?
Do you remember the days?
Days long past, days of shame
You cried, you laughed, we danced in the rain

Your looks of innocence, illusions which hid
Skeleton demons, brimming with sin
They lie, they burn; they lurk within
Blinded, fooled, you had me convinced.

Wake me up before I fall asleep again
And put to rest, the restless dead
Am I the myth? Are you the truth?
Me the illusion, uplifted soon
Me the sinner and you the saint
Words twist me, I'll never be the same

Soon I'll awake..
All just a dream, a fragile dream
I'm wandering toward, all the unseen

Beautiful, terrible, put to rest with a sigh
Now a memory, deep…deep inside
Fading, graying, buried deeper in time.
Remember the sacrifice, all I gave up
Pushing, fighting, racing for your trust

Me the sinner and you the saint
Your words twist, all confusing me
Lost in the dark, too scared to see
And wonder will I ever be the same

Eyes blurred, my mind was fogged
You and me, it was all I ever saw
Enraptured, tortured, chained to your ways
The dawn has come! Soon I'll be awake!

Wake me up before I fall asleep again
And put to rest, the restless dead
Am I the myth? Are you the truth?
Me the illusion, uplifted soon
Me the sinner and you the saint
Words twist me, I'll never be the same

The dawn has come
Soon, I will awake...
Looking for constructive feedback on this song.

Does the metaphor make sense or is it confusing?

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kat4026's avatar
i love it it would make a nice song